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What no cliffhanger? I can hear the screams of your more impressionable fans, having been conditioned to expect one, screaming "Cliff me, smut-mommy, cliff meeee!"
Oh, those poor souls.
If ships got death certificates, I am sure "Cause of death: Kraken creampie", would be a rare entry, if not unique.
Thankyou for bring the Arizona into the tale. A fitting addition to this tale. Great almost ending to an amazing story. 5 stars for everything you do for us.
Once more a well written chapter of a wondrous saga.
The inclusion of the Arizona reminded me of a man I worked with so many years ago. He went by his nickname "Red", gotten back to those last days when he personally fought fires on the ships after the attack at Pearl Harbor. All of us at the shop loved him for his brave and heroic efforts. He had his scars to prove it.
One of my wife's uncles was in the second flight sent up looking for that Japanese fleet. He died just a few years ago.
Greatly enjoyed this chapter. The uss arizona part gave me goosebumps inspite of me not being an American lol. However I couldn't understand why Francois' power won't go to someone else. If you could include an explainer in the next part, it would be very helpful
DA-AMN!!! What an end to Frankie le Douche, and a spit in the eye of Poseidon, and the Great Game. I thought that Beth was going to do like Elizabeth Swan and become a Pirate Queen. (I was still trying to reconcile that with her affection for her land-locked boytoys.) Your solution was so much better! And your describing it was fantastic.
You put so much research into your stories, and I must to thank you for this effort. I'm glad that Mr Conter hung around long enough so his shipmates could answer Death's call.
I eagerly look forward to May 11 and the final chapter. I hope that Cyrus in not dead, as others have suggested. Maybe he can sublet his apartment to Ingrid, so she can be nearby.
There was quite a bit of snorts of amusement and a few wow's, after this chapter I am ready for some cleaning up and rebuilding. Some proper after battle reports and just kinda boring stuff.
Mike and the gang has earned a long rest..
Another incredible adventure is winding down. But, what a fantastic journey all your readers have enjoyed so far. I can see the elements of the next instalment sprinkled throughout the tale and really look forward to the future of HFHM.
Wow. Great historical link in and a wonderful way to draw towards the wrap up. Thank you again for sharing this fantastic series (and all the spin-offs) with us.
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Latest 15 Reader Comments
What no cliffhanger? I can hear the screams of your more impressionable fans, having been conditioned to expect one, screaming "Cliff me, smut-mommy, cliff meeee!"
Oh, those poor souls.
If ships got death certificates, I am sure "Cause of death: Kraken creampie", would be a rare entry, if not unique.
Thanks for the chapter!
Thankyou for bring the Arizona into the tale. A fitting addition to this tale. Great almost ending to an amazing story. 5 stars for everything you do for us.
A great chapter. Au revoir Francois
Maw to Maw between a dragon and a kraken.
This was wonderful, again your talent for storytelling is amazing. And such anfuck yeah moment with the uss Arizona.
Once more a well written chapter of a wondrous saga.
The inclusion of the Arizona reminded me of a man I worked with so many years ago. He went by his nickname "Red", gotten back to those last days when he personally fought fires on the ships after the attack at Pearl Harbor. All of us at the shop loved him for his brave and heroic efforts. He had his scars to prove it.
One of my wife's uncles was in the second flight sent up looking for that Japanese fleet. He died just a few years ago.
Well done.
Greatly enjoyed this chapter. The uss arizona part gave me goosebumps inspite of me not being an American lol. However I couldn't understand why Francois' power won't go to someone else. If you could include an explainer in the next part, it would be very helpful
DA-AMN!!! What an end to Frankie le Douche, and a spit in the eye of Poseidon, and the Great Game. I thought that Beth was going to do like Elizabeth Swan and become a Pirate Queen. (I was still trying to reconcile that with her affection for her land-locked boytoys.) Your solution was so much better! And your describing it was fantastic.
You put so much research into your stories, and I must to thank you for this effort. I'm glad that Mr Conter hung around long enough so his shipmates could answer Death's call.
I eagerly look forward to May 11 and the final chapter. I hope that Cyrus in not dead, as others have suggested. Maybe he can sublet his apartment to Ingrid, so she can be nearby.
"Boom-boom, bony fucks." Lmfao. 'Nuff said.
Cute story! Maybe breeding follow up chapter? 👀
He probably camped there every full moon after that night hoping she'd come back. He'd probably get a kick out of knowing he was a furry daddy. lol
There was quite a bit of snorts of amusement and a few wow's, after this chapter I am ready for some cleaning up and rebuilding. Some proper after battle reports and just kinda boring stuff.
Mike and the gang has earned a long rest..
I'm pretty late for Valentine's, however I also rather enjoyed your rendition!!!
👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
Another incredible adventure is winding down. But, what a fantastic journey all your readers have enjoyed so far. I can see the elements of the next instalment sprinkled throughout the tale and really look forward to the future of HFHM.
Wow. Great historical link in and a wonderful way to draw towards the wrap up. Thank you again for sharing this fantastic series (and all the spin-offs) with us.