Every bit of that had my heart racing and wanting more!
Just keeps getting worse and worse. At first I didn't blame her much for abandoning Helena. A life like theirs can cause people to do all kinds of not-very-sisterly things without their being evil or irredeemable.
But she really is straight up awful, and not very bright. She's not completely stupid, but she'd have to be a lot smarter to pull off these long-cons she's a fan of. It seems she's got the acting talent, and the bag of tricks (though not anymore) but she doesn't seem to give herself an out.
Helena is such a sweetheart, I could see her sticking up for her sister when judgement day comes, but I really hope that doesn't happen. I kinda hope Victor kills her and the pack never learns the full story. To protect Helena's feelings. She's had it hard enough.
I gave Rebecca the benefit of the doubt,you know maybe she really couldn't return to Helena, maybe there was a good reason she never returned. NOPE! Just a psychotic evil whore of a bitch! love the story look forward to more.
Love the fear, the joy, the passion. Looking forward to more chapters. FYI, I think the word you're looking for is progeny, not prodigy.
Thanks for writing.
Natalia still has some growing up to do. She has to realize those plans we write out for our lives don't always go as planned. She just hast to adjust her plans and hope for the best.
It is possible that Rebecca doesn't know that this is the vampire after her sister. But if she does, she's in for a real hard time.
The Gryphon's on FIRE!!!
Angel is SO annoying girl, but Mara is fantastic. Love her
Please add Maggie into it . Like let her know abt werewolves . Loved it can't wait for d other 1
The first two chapters were a bit slow, but this mating chase was intense.
good writing style, but get a editor.
I always enjoy a bit of TG and demon TF. This series seems to still be going strong, it's nice to have little bits like this, it wouldn't really work as longer segments, just because of how it's set up. Good work. Keep it up.
Loving the twists and turns. Not a typical plot, can't wait to read more.
Please, I will help in any way I can if it will help you get the chapters out faster!! This was awesome, I know you have a life, but let's put that aside and focuse on what's important...SMP (joking here...but not really)! Honestly, great installment can't wait to read more
Sorry to post it on here but do you plan on finishing your other story A wolf's captive?
But I think I've figured out the 3 souls she heals. Now to go on reading this for the umpteenth time.......
Where is the rest of it?????????????????
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