Finally got some positive hate mail. Wohoo!
So she just left her baby? What a terrible mother
Are you for real, stop taking the piss and get on with the story,ARGHHHHHHHHHH
5 Stars! Nice story! Some more!
MORE please. Great as always can't wait for the next chapter
This portion of the story starts to round out Jim's position and where he is starting to go. The interactions are enjoyable and make an interesting dynamic of personalities learning to accept others. I have noticed some very minor grammatical errors, but just make the changes in my head to get the sense of what was said or described. The typo's are the same type of things my own words commonly do, perhaps that is why the wording or construction or spelling jumps out in my mind so easily. Just like this note, I'll have to reread it several times to have it make sense to someone else. My mind automatically adds the missing parts into place and that mental editing escapes my conscious notice. Please do continue this story and thanks again for sharing this wonderful story with all of us.
Very nice beginning and well written with great descriptions. At least I hope this was just the beginning. I'd definitely like more. I haven't read Sacrafice, but don't let the comparison's bother you. There really is no such thing as a completely original story. One can always find something to compare it to. I was thinking it was somewhat like Beauty and the Beast, but that doesn't stop me from enjoying it. Please keep it up. 5 stars. ~K.
Hoping for more. 5 stars ~K.
I hope there is another chapter.
Sequel would be nice
ooooh what about some kind of cross over?
waiting for pt2
Yeah because the concept of the story was so unrealistic I just made the raptor the jurassic park movie version since they are most well known in popular culture.
I'm well aware of how a real raptor would look, but once again, the story is quite obviously fiction and I liked the idea of the Jurassic park raptor since the movie really got me interested in dinosaurs.
I was considering adding feathers at the end, but it's pretty easy to use your imagination and accept that this is an fictitious situation with a fictitious dinosaur.
Despite that I hope you enjoyed .
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