by midnightj
A nice lil write, full of hope.
I can feel what you want, and even where ya wanna take this. Just need a lil better painting.
You have some great metaphors, needs a lil pull.
Good write with feelings of hope and inspiration ...
More Please, do not give up.
I like the feel of your poetry !! * Smiles *
Just my opinion, please take no offense. ~
Through Love's maelstrom of emotions ~ a tiny thread of hope prevails...
Too many promises unfilled; too many meetings unmet; too much longing unfulfilled. At some point desires and hope are strained beyond what can be imagined and then...