All Comments on '04' Thread of Hope'

Too many promises unfilled; too many meetings unmet; too much longing unfulfilled. At some point desires and hope are strained beyond what can be imagined and then...

Through Love's maelstrom of emotions ~ a tiny thread of hope prevails...

A nice lil write, full of hope.

I can feel what you want, and even where ya wanna take this. Just need a lil better painting.

You have some great metaphors, needs a lil pull.

Good write with feelings of hope and inspiration ...

More Please, do not give up.

I like the feel of your poetry !! * Smiles *

Just my opinion, please take no offense. ~