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Your poem has been mentioned in the New Poems thread on the Literotica Poetry Forum:

http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?p=16338591#post16338591

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Great closing line!

Lichens under a toilet seat? eek. I do not want to get all biological on ya, but I doubt it, unless the toilet seat was on a rock or log or something... which is not unheard of :)

welcome, hope you stick around, enjoyed your poem-

annaswirls

Thousands of people living in large cities never even exchanging glances ~ privacy protected.

on a lunch hour stoned. TK U MLJ LV NV