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by Chewtoi

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Safe_BetSafe_Betover 15 years ago
Wow!

You have such a great way of making your prose just ooze emotion. Loved it!

WickedEveWickedEveover 15 years ago
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Good poem! If you get a chance, visit the literotica poetry forum.

unpredictablebijouunpredictablebijouover 15 years ago
this is nice work

It's passionate and vivid and reminded me of Nabokov's Lolita in that it's both lustful and condemning at the same time. Well done, and welcome.

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