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My favorite of the day. You have such a way with words.

Curiouswife

trademark language twists and wonderful story telling. Good job, 4d!

Fly

This sounds slick to my ear as it tumbles off my tongue.

That almost unique 4° style ~

I say almost because lobomao frequently seems to reflect him.

This poem makes you want to wade out until you reach the deep waters of understanding. A little Poetic Gem!

Tearing into the fleshy bits of mind <br>

he stirs<br>

fifty nine pounds <br>

of dead weight<br>

fifty nine days till<br>

he arrives<br>

<br>

the heaviness<br>

gravity's dispute<br>

with your will<br>

fifty nine reasons<br>

not to care<br>

but i still do<br>

<br>

fifty nine years,<br>

one might think it makes sense<br>

it only makes feelings<br>

<br>

<br>the push in the plexes

<br>the moment of satori

<br>moment i touch its skin

<br>

fifty nine thoughts<br>

to the back of the bus<br>

fifty nine steps to get<br>

back off<br>

<br>

there it is<br>

numbered fifty nine<br>

in this town<br>

of desolation<br>

<br>

the signs point<br>

the right direction<br>

an old archaic route<br>

little travelled<br>

of confusional metaphors. TK U MLJ LV NV