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by smithpeter

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WickedEveWickedEveover 18 years ago
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I know I am the first and maybe I'll be the only one to comment. There should be more comments on this poem and the rest. I don't know what's going on with the elephants, but I know it's wonderful.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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With the way that sentence never ends and overwhelms, elephants make perfect sense in this humorous word play.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Evocative.

A sea of Maelstrom winds seems to take these lines and blow them back into the past ~ images - violent and stark move this poem until it ends up in a garden in the summertime.

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