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by ghost_girl
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Tzaraalmost 15 years agoThe first strophe is better,
I think, but I can't tell you why I think that. Feel thing, I guess. A good poem that is very visual.
annaswirlsalmost 15 years agoGarden girl!
Your poem has been mentioned in the New Poem Recommendation Thread here: http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?p=31222683&posted=1#post31222683
GuiltyPleasurealmost 15 years agoloved this.
What an imagination! Only a gardener could see a carnival among the melons or imagine pelting the neighbours tomatoes. Great fun. <p> Tess
UnderYourSpellalmost 15 years ago~
This struck a chord with me my melons are not doing well! What a good idea to come up with though well done.
sandspikeover 14 years agoI Can Taste This!
I can see and taste this beauty...have a little trouble dancing to it, but left with an eye and belly full. Good poem.
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