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PandoraGlittersPandoraGlittersover 14 years ago
This shows promise.

You have some interesting images and diction here and a good ending. Why don't you come write with us on the forum a bit?

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
FRISBEES ARE FLATISH

and they spin are they the earth. TK U MLJ LV NV

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“I tried hard to imagine my poems or any poems as machines that could make things happen, changing the government, or the economy or even their language, the body or its sensorium, but I could not imagine this, could not even imagine imagining it. And yet when I imagined the ...