All Comments on 'a dyslexic mirror'

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sacksackover 18 years ago
very interesting....

Sounds like someone stuttering backwards. The last three lines are the most awkward, as it is difficult to determine what the crowd really wants.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Dreary

and enervating

KRKRover 18 years ago
Clever and fun

I enjoyed this one very much. I had to take a mental step sideways, but I do that often enough. And once I had done that, the obsessive monkey-brain somewhat at bay, I could let it flow through me, and the essence made sense. Very clever this dyslexic mirror, and evocative.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A real dyslexic tongue twister;

Gone through once

Now I need a drink.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
creative fire

This poem ignites my fires of curosity. Seems very twisted yet was an enjoyable read. How skillfully your literary brush strokes the computer screen to the delight of your readers.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
THE MIRROR PURCHASED FROM THE FUNHOUSE

changing appearances at will. TK U MLJ LV NV

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