All Comments on 'A Midwinter's Night'

This was very cryptic and twisted. I love it! Please tell us you have more.

A very interesting poem! At first I was a bit put off as things weren't making much sense and it seemed like some rhymes were very forced. But a good poem always gets better when reread. The repetitive idea that "she is always watching" gave me a delicious creepy, eerie feeling. I shall come back to this again for further rereads and more discoveries. A good piece. Definite 5.

You had a good thin going in the begining then, I don't know what happen for me it went all whonky. I don't know maybe it's just me?