All Comments on 'A New Life Begins'

interesting perspective... (~_~) thank you for this read.

a rainbow of emotion that runs around the colour wheel and draws us into the white light of creation. It's a good prose poem that I think could even be trimmed into a really good free verse form.

(thermometer set to glowing by my own personal default)

Really fine prose poem and I concur with champ that, with some trimming, you could have a terrific free form poem.