All Comments on 'A Place in Time'

This poem gives you a rush of blood to the head when you read it. Couple of suggestions: 1) typos: I've noticed several typing errors 2) length: I think its just a tad too long, think about going through it with a comb cutting out anything which detracts from what you want to say.

and time, I don't think it is too long, maybe brake it into stanzas, a break or two, but the whole poem tells one thing, passion in a powerful write. <grin> I enjoyed it.

VD's call seems about right;

Run a spell check but then still run through again with your eyes,

For spell check won't tell whether bare or bear is appropriate;

Then split it into at least 2, preferably 3 strophes

To make the reading flow more smoothly.