by Anschul
To an anschloss with the maker of all Anschuls
I enjoyed this piece. Inserting more personal touch (in addition to the humor) might have been an added value to your poem. Thanks.
I love that first comment!!!!, Well the poem, it would work, if everything was rhymed except the last line.
i loved the quirky humor of this poem. yet, in the final line, why do i get the feeling you are dead serious? the cows and apples are my favorites.