All Comments on 'Absent Heart'

has been recommended in the New Poems Review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!

All light hearted kidding and friendly bantering aside, I believe that with this poem you provided an opportunity to understand a side of you which has not been easily avaiable so far (IMO), namely - the pain and the volunrability. But at the same time the poem clearly points to some of your optimistic more construictive views which I have been able to appreciate through what you have presented in your poems.

Thanks for this piece.

A powerful sonnet. I see from Angeline's review how this is so much like a mirror to UYS's <i>Me</i>, or its counterpoint. Read together they're a truly powerful combination.

delving into the deep tends to feel like being butchered with a dull butter knife. hurts like hell and can't be over fast enough, but it's worth it to stare down old ghosts.

introspective and very moving. i find a lot of courage in your words.