All Comments on 'Acceptance: Finding My Way'

I like this. And it made me dizzy.

Good for you.

I too have allowed others' possible opinion to take me down. Like you, I have retaken what really always was mine.

Jack

I am happy that my vote lifted it up into the "Hot" category where it belongs. 😉

I love it!

Liz

I really like the way you did this, form and format really worked well. It had me spiraling into who you are. Loved the surprise at the end.

not guilty but with a report . TK U MLJ LV NV

I love creative, witty poetry and whoop there it is

Not as good as your stories

" Obedient Mistress Was Between Gently When Always Sexuality ? "

Truth by examination.

trying to keep up with your plethora of stories and your poem of sexual self-discovery. no one could know and revel in the pleasures as well as you do without having a ravenous appetite and satisfactionn that you seemingly get without first-hand knowledge and desire of such things. thanks, Jasmine

ken

LOVED IT! Keep up the good work!

scat all over the place why bother it don't add nothing to the poem

Unique visual that drew me in to read it immediately. Liked the theme and what pictures your words drew in my mind of her serving her mistress, worshiping her mistress, loving her mistress and looking forward to pleasing her mistress for the rest of her life.

Prose in fancy dress is still prose. A poem is different, and this wasn't. Your prose, if copy edited, is not bad, and could be really good.

VERY creative format for your poem.....enjoyed it!

can I have your number??? Teeheehee.

Oh, the poem. The format was visually alluring to me because I like that strange stuff. You have one small typo (Ever-Every--unless you intended it that way) and I think some of the words could be trimmed to make it more succinct. Overall, I enjoyed reading it, but mainly due to the content and layout. Nice and keep going, experiment further with this form.

format fits the words. words could be a little less prose.

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