All Comments on 'acts'

and cleverly executed. it's not easy to make this sort of list poem work, but your use of end rhyme and, more subtly, internal rhyming/alliteration make this piece full of movement up and down the musical scale.

'cream' is the perfect ending.

You and Sweet Oblivion are the masters (er, mistresses?) Scratch that.

I didn't mean to say "Scratch that.". I meant to say....Oh, never mind.

Others could learn a lot from the both of you about how to write good erotic poetry is what I meant, of course.

Very imaginative.

Perfect rhythm, rhyme, and alliteration with great touches of humor make this a great poem that was a pleasure to read over many times. Good work!

as I am a freak for verbs, love the action in your poem. I like it for lotsa reasons.

~ maria