All Comments on 'Afternoon Delight'

Wow.. Can feel the excitement with every word.. Short and to the point..Mmmm Did ya meet? Details plezzz.. Have a feeling I know what the next poem will be about *Grins*~~Great one.. Keep'm coming~!!!

Oh HONEY~..Made my afternoon delightful with this afternoon delightful read...grin,,, yes more please!

...just grab those keys, and meet me halfway, honeygirl! This is classic Honey123: short, oh so sweet, and goes right to MY point! But, hey, get out from under those covers! I want to watch you...

... lover! What a way to close. So much passion in so few words. Well done. ~Imp

I don't read lots of poems but I liked that one, see ya.

I'm with them, details girl!! lol ;-)

Slowly getting around to reading more of your stuff. If this is anything to go by, can't wait to read the stories!!

Any good??? Worth it??

It's Hot gurl

*fans self*

Love it!

Thanks.

~ Jenn

ahhhhh

go ahead

grab a bite;

that's why it's called

"Afternoon Delight" ~ now run!

Nothing like a little snack in the afternoon!

without the "young". Especially if it's read aloud.

Nice sense of anticipation!