All Comments on 'Afternoon Delight'

without the "young". Especially if it's read aloud.

Nice sense of anticipation!

Nothing like a little snack in the afternoon!

ahhhhh

go ahead

grab a bite;

that's why it's called

"Afternoon Delight" ~ now run!

It's Hot gurl

*fans self*

Love it!

Thanks.

~ Jenn

Any good??? Worth it??

I'm with them, details girl!! lol ;-)

Slowly getting around to reading more of your stuff. If this is anything to go by, can't wait to read the stories!!

I don't read lots of poems but I liked that one, see ya.

... lover! What a way to close. So much passion in so few words. Well done. ~Imp

...just grab those keys, and meet me halfway, honeygirl! This is classic Honey123: short, oh so sweet, and goes right to MY point! But, hey, get out from under those covers! I want to watch you...

Oh HONEY~..Made my afternoon delightful with this afternoon delightful read...grin,,, yes more please!

Wow.. Can feel the excitement with every word.. Short and to the point..Mmmm Did ya meet? Details plezzz.. Have a feeling I know what the next poem will be about *Grins*~~Great one.. Keep'm coming~!!!