All Comments on 'Aiming Point'

almost like a strangely obsessed construction worker, or an old guy refusing to retire here, I really enjoyed it and loved the unconventional subject - hoo-rah!

on the same wavelength...nice job!

has been mentioned in fridays reviews

I love the builder's theme; a wonderful image for this challenge!

which two poets were working together on this poem, I knew I was in for something good. I can't think of a better poetic match than you two. :)

An excellent cooperative effort, well integrated;

Usually two writers' words would be in conflict, but not here;

especially like saying aloud that phrase, "plumb line

snaps."

A poetic match made on earth ~ with heavenly results.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.

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