All Comments on 'Al Pacino Breakfast'

Distilled down to the few needed words.

It paints a clear enough picture but leaves room for the readers to insert themselves in there as well.

Very nice work.

bits of sarcasm in the scramble. hence: sins frying. just one take on the piece. enjoyed......don

Nicely written, a very

enjoyable read!

Thanks.

~ J

..in the review thread - June 28th.

Tess

nicely spun...tight...i love poems that invite you to wonder...why does your sin need to be absolved because of your broken heart...thanks.

An excellent piece that

Pulls you into the

Dissolute life of a bachelor.

A new first ~ cheese and sausage granting absolution.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,500 poems.

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Yawn