All Comments on 'Amarillo Rose and a candles glow'

Art,

I love your work. I am an new poet on this site

and you were kind enough to comment on one of my pieces.

I think you mispelled "prairie" though.

I would invite you to see some of my recent postings.

Carol Anne

and I liked the stanza about the tumbleweeds...good imagery! It might have read more smoothly if the "Little creek" line was a bit longer, to balance the rhythm!

Art just wonderful.. slowly draws one into the visual aspects of the scene..my favorite was..

Quote:

sheets prarie ridden

passion soothing soul

the other coin jingled grin

the warm wind blow

Nice...hmmm... I was there for a split second... on to more..

Du Lac

you've got my attention..on to part 2.

inviting smile in leather and cleavage

boot click smiles across the floor~

Ooohhh great lines here. Your imagery has a smile of its own. I loved the theme and subject matter.

Ya takin us on a trip, behind closed doors.

The whole *feel* of the poem is swaggeringly sassy~~!!<winks n grins>

Going to read the next one~!!

This is the "Wild West" that went behind them thar closed doors up in the second floors of saloons, wasn't it? ;)