All Comments on 'Amarillo Rose the Married Man'

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sacksackover 19 years ago
nice series....

Your rhyming sense is intriguing....always irregular, with fascinating surprises!

LilDarlinLilDarlinover 19 years ago
Sneaky~~

*Smiles*..Threw us a curve ball with this one. Just great~!!!Loved your play on words.

The soft light flickering

and that smile upon her face...

Just sweet an sexy this one~!!

Du LacDu Lacover 19 years ago
hmmmm

Tail..

I just love the changing tones that move from ballad to ballad. Your use of irregular rhyme and the drawing of intense desires for more.. leaves one sitting and waiting for the next chapter... I loved this line! sometimes it is just a line that gets one breathless;

Like a million minute wait

hmmmm I felt it

Du Lac

AnnoraAnnoraover 19 years ago
Fantabulous

Need I say more?

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