by My Erotic Tale
Tail..
I just love the changing tones that move from ballad to ballad. Your use of irregular rhyme and the drawing of intense desires for more.. leaves one sitting and waiting for the next chapter... I loved this line! sometimes it is just a line that gets one breathless;
Like a million minute wait
hmmmm I felt it
Du Lac
*Smiles*..Threw us a curve ball with this one. Just great~!!!Loved your play on words.
The soft light flickering
and that smile upon her face...
Just sweet an sexy this one~!!
Your rhyming sense is intriguing....always irregular, with fascinating surprises!