All Comments on 'Another about the Two'

love that.

Some great writing and great images here.

a wonderful look at duality and our dual nature.

another glimpse of your soul

: )

Thank you

is hard to let go...and duel reminders pull us into each void by the energy of perception...great expression...and feeling ...thanx/bluerain

The double entendre in the first line left me expecting more.

Instead the poem turns into a hard little piece

about a little piece hardened (to double the entendre)

to survive as she must

just

split into two

wondering

which one

is who?

Duality worth pondering.

I think this is quite powerful, with some very strong phrases.

One of those women,

You know the type,

That always appear to be on the brink of exploding.

There is a type of pleasure that is painful ~ sexual gratification - joypain.