All Comments on 'Another about the Two'

There is a type of pleasure that is painful ~ sexual gratification - joypain.

One of those women,

You know the type,

That always appear to be on the brink of exploding.

I think this is quite powerful, with some very strong phrases.

The double entendre in the first line left me expecting more.

Instead the poem turns into a hard little piece

about a little piece hardened (to double the entendre)

to survive as she must

just

split into two

wondering

which one

is who?

Duality worth pondering.

is hard to let go...and duel reminders pull us into each void by the energy of perception...great expression...and feeling ...thanx/bluerain

love that.

Some great writing and great images here.

a wonderful look at duality and our dual nature.

another glimpse of your soul

: )

Thank you