All Comments on 'Another Lover'

I rather like this although I'm none too keen of having every line start with a capital letter, I think it would flow better thus;

Please don't be afraid

of the bumps, bruises,

cuts that adorn my skin.

But having said that, this is miles better than many other poems submitted on the same subject

yearning for pain or pleasure? previous lover has't done enough or inflicted more?