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All Comments on 'Another Sadder Day Night'

by VannaJonez

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JWrenJWrenover 9 years ago
Hopeful

Sad but hopeful. The optimism is spelled out clear as day (or night). One suggestion: delete "like' from second line in fourth stanza; not needed.

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