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I enjoyed your poetry (~_~)

If you want to work in a form so meter & rhyme-laden, try some additional work. Here's a sample suggestion from the 1st strophe, first as written:

"Another time, another place…

my tender touch on your face;

my whispered words in your ear.

These I’d do to still your fears."

Then with a little added tweaking:

"Another time, another place…

my tender touch upon your face;

I whisper words into your ear.

These I would do to still your fears."

Do you hear that slight, but significantly different sound?

That magical time ~ when love first begans.