All Comments on 'Apparent Confusion'

by JCSTREET

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WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
excellent poem

You write beautifully and the last lines of this poem are stunning.

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Typical...

...creamy beauty from this poet, the hand of the god of adjectives. Complete grace of flow!

jthserrajthserraalmost 20 years ago
Very interesting...

from a moon moan to the, perhaps, overmodified curve the poem snapped through some intriguing images. Very good...

jim : )

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

Looked and read and read some more,

With insight hidden in the dross...

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Vibrant

A mysterious capturing of a nocturnal scene.

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