All Comments on 'Apparent Confusion'

A mysterious capturing of a nocturnal scene.

Looked and read and read some more,

With insight hidden in the dross...

from a moon moan to the, perhaps, overmodified curve the poem snapped through some intriguing images. Very good...

jim : )

...creamy beauty from this poet, the hand of the god of adjectives. Complete grace of flow!

You write beautifully and the last lines of this poem are stunning.