All Comments on 'Approval'

and the way you've enjambed sentences across lines gives it a modern feel and one that is appropriate to your subject. Great read!

Five.

Loved this one SO and particularly liked how you turned it around ...... the Dom needing reassurance

A wonderful poem! The first time I read it, it reminded me of the Beatles song Lady Madonna but reading though it a few more times I could see it was much more sophisticated. I like it! Raw and meaningful! Good poetry!

Little confused as to why, AbAA scheme. Doesn't seem to work, not a purist BTW, far from it. But the extra A demeans (pardon) your work.

100!

Very well done!

oh, sorry dudes--teeheehee. This poem made me harken back, I'm sorry to say, to unpleasantness, so it had a "piss me off" effect. When we read we often draw from experiences and those can be good and bad. As poetry, quite nice, as memory, well that kinda sucked for me, but doesn't reflect on the quality of the verse. All poems should not make us feel like fluffy butterflies, but rather remember and not f-up again.