All Comments on 'Archery Results:'

like a graph

two lines

in different colours

one the shape of a rollercoaster

the second

a smooth, steady ascension

the trend is up, always up

the peaks and troughs

just part of the ride

as for arrows - they don't hurt a bit

unless they get torn out

ignore the arrow, trust me, you know the way my mind works

zero in on these two lines:

led away to the tilt-a-whirl, spun, circumnavigated,

and as I became cognizant once again,

very generally speaking "circumnavigated", and "cognizant" would be words to avoid, however, here it adds to the sense of vertigo, now do you need "once"?

5ed

The sign of the Archer : Saggitarius ? 5-ed ( BTW today it's a virtual feast for the discernin' reader with U , GM , Dem all bursting on the NP screen together : Merry Christmas !)