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by steve porter

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foehn2foehn2over 16 years ago
Oddly, I'm ok with this. *smile*

Nicely written, and rhythmic. The sound flows nicely, and although I didn't much care for the word "except" -- I loved the simile of the exhausted balloon.

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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Good to see you back; hope we'll start seeing more from your mind with quality as good as this little piece.

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