All Comments on 'aspiring to dream'

...phrasing and feel. A dreamy gem!

Lovely words, familiar feeling.

inquiring minds

want to know

how a dream dreamt me

Just wonderful, Liar.

wow!! excellent display of your way with words..my favorite part-

and when lungs breathe

ghosts of water

and I slide

into the numb

I know that feeling, its intoxicating, love this poem :)

I like this poem

it made me happy and sad all at the same time

But you didn't answer that long eternal question that if you die in your sleep, will you ever wake up?

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.

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Contemplating the long plunge ~ into everlasting oblivion.