All Comments on 'Autumn and Spring'

The poem is clinical, filled with statements,. There is very little for the imagination to grab hold of. I see a person making observations and they are not coming out very poetic. You can and have done so much better. This is a sad disappointment.

I am a new writer and you inspire me. Thank you for sharing this with the world!

never had an older man and now I am wondering.

I have read all your works and will read them again, and barely legal I am

it is that lies behind this fine poem..

Just a beautifully written group of verses with metaphors all about the May December Romances.

read, it just flowed off my tongue. i loved it thanks for sharing

TT

You have a poem that's almost a song lyric and you tell a good story inside it. I enjoyed reading it.

My personal opinion is that a good editor could only help improve this poem for me as a reader or you could add it to the construction thread (literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?t=254058) at the Poetry Feedback and Discussion Forum on the Bulletin Boards here at Literotica.