All Comments on 'Awaiting the Flash'

by hipeeps72

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erectus123erectus123almost 11 years ago
nice quick flow, good emotional set up that resolves rapidly

but do these lines indicate coitus?

"Painful Poses

Quick Adjustments"

if so might we have a little more before the redressing snaps?

just my take on a nice poem

Paul4playPaul4playabout 3 years ago

Nice “snapshot” of your exhibitionism...

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