All Comments on 'Awaiting the Flash'

by hipeeps72

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Paul4playPaul4playabout 3 years ago

Nice “snapshot” of your exhibitionism...

erectus123erectus123almost 11 years ago
nice quick flow, good emotional set up that resolves rapidly

but do these lines indicate coitus?

"Painful Poses

Quick Adjustments"

if so might we have a little more before the redressing snaps?

just my take on a nice poem

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