All Comments on 'Bathyl II'

This has to be your best one yet! My God, it's beautiful. Truly beautiful. And that first stanza blew me away. This is real poetry.

This one touched my soul. Very beautiful.

This poem is incredible and so beautiful. It took my breath away!

...yes a real beauty...like a delicate prismatic bubble blowing in the breeze...thanks.

strong images

the bittersweet ending. A stunning and painful poem. Well done...

jim : )

Lauren - beautiful enough to make me cry, and so sweet. I love this one!

...I guess I have something invested in this one myself.

The last one I read reminded me how good you are. This one reminds me why I love you. You can really see. It's a good feeling, reading this, and remembering who I am. It's a window, perhaps, into you... and that feels good, too.

It's lovely, Lauren. It touched my heart as well as my soul.

Am I the only one who thinks this writer is so full of herself that she only strings words together without any concept of form or shape?

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.

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I forgot everything ~ now all is lost.

clothing all desires. TK U MLJ LV NV