All Comments on 'BBQ flavored bubble gum'

I feel it Art. Gripping lil poem ya got here. I *see* you tied up ... Pacing ... Steaming ...

Loved this poem.

with raw emotional images of outrage at total inhumane actions...well done...the title does not impact well on this however,,,its such a great poem..

some might miss because the title seems flippant..imho..0))lol/blue

Excellent work! I felt it right along with you.

for a thousand years of what i read here. very moving with some damn good imagery here......very nice.......don

I have to give 5 before reading the poem because the title is so damn eye catching! However I notice the titled has been questioned for not reflecting the gravity of the poem which is a valid point.

The poem is full of sentiment and good imagery too and well worth the praise.

b'brig

i especially liked the first three verses...thanks.

Well done Art

another gem you

have here!

Well done,

loved it!

Thanks.

~ J

And blow the top off the thermometer!!!

intense and gut-wrenching

to the roots of the soul

the title serves well;

let down your guard and experience it,

the Mack truck delivers it full bore,

the mind-numbing horror

of the shredding

of joyous innocence

hear ya, Art

If I chew BBQ flavored bubble gum, will I write this well?

ty, bd

Fortifying oneself against the horrors of this world.

loved the imagery of this poem!

the death parts us all. TK U MLJ LV NV