All Comments on 'BBQ flavored bubble gum'

the death parts us all. TK U MLJ LV NV

loved the imagery of this poem!

Fortifying oneself against the horrors of this world.

If I chew BBQ flavored bubble gum, will I write this well?

ty, bd

And blow the top off the thermometer!!!

intense and gut-wrenching

to the roots of the soul

the title serves well;

let down your guard and experience it,

the Mack truck delivers it full bore,

the mind-numbing horror

of the shredding

of joyous innocence

hear ya, Art

Well done Art

another gem you

have here!

Well done,

loved it!

Thanks.

~ J

i especially liked the first three verses...thanks.

I have to give 5 before reading the poem because the title is so damn eye catching! However I notice the titled has been questioned for not reflecting the gravity of the poem which is a valid point.

The poem is full of sentiment and good imagery too and well worth the praise.

b'brig

for a thousand years of what i read here. very moving with some damn good imagery here......very nice.......don

Excellent work! I felt it right along with you.

with raw emotional images of outrage at total inhumane actions...well done...the title does not impact well on this however,,,its such a great poem..

some might miss because the title seems flippant..imho..0))lol/blue

I feel it Art. Gripping lil poem ya got here. I *see* you tied up ... Pacing ... Steaming ...

Loved this poem.