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Artina HeartflashArtina Heartflashover 11 years ago
pornetry

Best line: "Big ass chesire grin as

I was heavy-sat on."

(BTW, CHESHIRE)

Worst line: "... I grabbed ass chowing

both holes."

Holes are empty. chowing is something a dog would do.

This would have looked better on a bathroom wall. Try again when you grow some heart.

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Jax Lazzo Rhapsody, just trying to get my stories known. This is essentially an experiment in my craft of writing. I will be trying different things here and there. I concluded this was on of the best sites, although pretty archaic, is simple to use. I'm trying to expand, lea...

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