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by Dustystar

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vrosej10vrosej10almost 15 years ago
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I like this poem, but I think it stumbles a little on reading; the lines trip over on your tongue. Great stuff though.

EroticOrogenyEroticOrogenyalmost 15 years ago
I know the feeling

Message comes through fairly clearly, but phrasing could use some polish

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
ITS CALLED AWOL

and a new term stockade/brig TK U MLJ LV NV

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