All Comments on 'Beach Villanelle'

far out to sea. TK U MLJ LV NV

Spending time at the beach and writing about it ~ not the worst way to go.

The form, the scene, spot on.

Form's done so well that the scene flows seamlessly, strengthening both.

You worked this really well. I've done a couple myself using repetition, and loved the rhythm of yours.

Great job. ;-)

you just make me wanna jump in the car and head for the coast, thank you, this is a wonderful. bouyant diversion ;)

I think you're right, Boo bested you with this form.

But I'm giving you a 5 anyhow; it's a damned hard form to do well. I've never succeeded with it.

And, well, there was some really nice stuff here.

I thought about trying to write one of those too

but I don't like mine, I loved yours <grin>

love the beach play, hehehey! nice~

The light-hearted humor wonderfully contrasts the formal structure. Well done, Spike!