Stuck on the beach. The lazy surf that drones
half-way the morning sings its song anew
of age and failure, taking as its cue
slow circulation round too brittle bones -
sleep slips across the reef. The hazy blue
lies trembling, beckoning… I am long due.
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THE RECEDING TIDE
will clean the slate, TK U MLJ LV NV
not sure of the style
seems like a reverse limerick maybe? Slightly long though, either way i dig it. Its deep and dark with obvious meaning, not to mention it rhymes. I like your style, keep posting.
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