Beached

bydemure101©

Stuck on the beach. The lazy surf that drones
half-way the morning sings its song anew
of age and failure, taking as its cue
slow circulation round too brittle bones -
sleep slips across the reef. The hazy blue
lies trembling, beckoning… I am long due.

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by tazz31712/04/12

THE RECEDING TIDE

will clean the slate, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by ableedingheart12/04/12

not sure of the style

seems like a reverse limerick maybe? Slightly long though, either way i dig it. Its deep and dark with obvious meaning, not to mention it rhymes. I like your style, keep posting.

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