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by demure101

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ableedingheartableedingheartover 11 years ago
not sure of the style

seems like a reverse limerick maybe? Slightly long though, either way i dig it. Its deep and dark with obvious meaning, not to mention it rhymes. I like your style, keep posting.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
THE RECEDING TIDE

will clean the slate, TK U MLJ LV NV

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