by lucky-E-leven
thanks are due for the idea and broad format of this peom borrowed with acknowledgement for mine. gracias.
This poem will have special significance to anyone who has every loved Someone with blue eyes.
This poem deserves praise for the passion bestowed in it. It moves like a stream and sets the imagination free! I felt like I was there!
Whoever you wrote this about sounds like one beautiful woman, inside and out. It's a very touching poem. I loved it.
Crossing over from prose to verse and back again displays rare talent. You have both the lyrical ear of the poet and the descritptive prose of the storyteller. Mixed in wonderful measure. Bravo.
-Colly
I told you I couldn't pick a favorite. It wasbeautiful and sweet.
What a lovely poem - just as lovely as the writer. Your words always move me, Lucky.
A depth and sincerity of feeling packed into such few words. Amazing!
Joining the others - I want to be her.
This is lovely. Lucky girl! It's me, isn't it? It's me I knew it. I love you too!
Whoever this is dedicated to has to be the Luckiest person on earth.
You multitalented monkey.
You know I've no self control. Can't help but inquire. I loved this one:
Behind blue eyes is a woman
Soft and subtle, strong and bold,
Thinking of everyone but herself.
Simply lovely.
- Mindy