by Tio_Narratore
To me it reads like a Travel brochure with perks. A list telling the reader what you did where, like a postcard sent saying 'Wish you were here'.
Beautiful all the way through with very dense super structure. I have to read it a few times more to get full enjoyment of it.
In the start it gave me a mood similar to Italo Calvino's "Le citta invisibilli". Probably he would have been jealous for not thinking of it.
5ed & recommended!
Thanks for sharing and for your invitation to read, I would have missed it otherwise.
Transported me to other places, other times... lovely language, beautiful, sensual, and ultimately visceral imagery. One of the best I've seen on Lit.
-Ayn
I enjoyed all of it, but the first stanza caught me, set the mood.