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by pink_tulip

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AngelineAngelinealmost 20 years ago
Loved it

This is powerful--short but complex, and the formatting really adds to it as well. Welcome!

Lauren HyndeLauren Hyndealmost 20 years ago
Excellent

Great way to introduce yourself. To be able to include such an array and complexity of elements in such a short poem really is laudable.

Lauren HyndeLauren Hyndealmost 20 years ago
Oops!

Sorry, forgot to rate it on that last comment. A big 5. :)

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
Great work

and welcome.

: )

Maria2394Maria2394almost 20 years ago
to feel, feeling

this is perfect......welcome to Lit :)

bluerainsbluerainsalmost 20 years ago
a small

bit of fine writing... I'll stay tuned....smiles./bluerain

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
WHY TALK TO THE WALLS

after the lover leaves, TK U MLJ LV NV

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