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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
WHY TALK TO THE WALLS

after the lover leaves, TK U MLJ LV NV

bluerainsbluerainsabout 20 years ago
a small

bit of fine writing... I'll stay tuned....smiles./bluerain

Maria2394Maria2394about 20 years ago
to feel, feeling

this is perfect......welcome to Lit :)

TathagataTathagataabout 20 years ago
Great work

and welcome.

: )

Lauren HyndeLauren Hyndeabout 20 years ago
Oops!

Sorry, forgot to rate it on that last comment. A big 5. :)

Lauren HyndeLauren Hyndeabout 20 years ago
Excellent

Great way to introduce yourself. To be able to include such an array and complexity of elements in such a short poem really is laudable.

AngelineAngelineabout 20 years ago
Loved it

This is powerful--short but complex, and the formatting really adds to it as well. Welcome!

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